The things that I do well in my writing are:

• I have excellent spelling
• I use punctuation like full stops.
• I make my stories very interesting
•  I have very interesting words

What I need to do better with is 

What I need to improve is working on my punctuation, question marks, and full stops.

I know that I have done a good job in my writing when

I don’t need to go back and re-check my writing.         

This is my book poster, about Lynley Dodd and she does funny Hairy Maclary books

Have you read one of her books before?

What writers do you like and why?

I’ve been working on this slide story.

Do you have any ideas on what I can put into my story to improve it, it’s called Choose your own Adventure?

Please try it out.

My favourite Matariki star is Hiwa-i-te-rangi because I like wishes and hopes. Matariki has nine stars and Matariki is the first star and

Hiwa-i-te-rangi is the last star of Matariki stars.

What is your favourite Matariki star?

What Matariki art should I do next?

1.  One thing I learnt is that the long hand is the minute hand and the short hand is the hour hand
2. I really enjoyed  the time google game.
3. I found tricky that when the long is between the two numbers.

I learned that I can learn how I am Body and Music smart.

It was fun because I added a picture to my blog.

What could I do next?